Email Service Notes (Nicholas)

Your Original Email

When I was young I wanted to be a soldier because I had saw many soldiers in the TV, I thought they were handsome and they can save lots of people in danger.But my chemistry score was very low so I had to give up my ideal to be a soldier.It was really a pity for me.

Now I am a painting teacher, I teach painting in Shanghai university. My students come from different regions,some of them are older. I teach them technical skills of paintings and special materials,they also can teach me something I don’t know about life,so I like spent time with them.

In the future, I prefer to be a free artist when I retire. The reason is that I have lots of things to do in my work,there is no time for me to draw .So I will stay in my house,draw something I favorite and play with my family members. If I can have a dog with me,it will be perfect!

Your Edited Email

When I was young I wanted to be a soldier because I had seen many soldiers on TV. I thought they were handsome and that they could save lots of people from danger. But my chemistry score was very low, so I had to give up my dream of being a soldier.It was really a pity for me.

Now I am a painting teacher. I teach painting at Shanghai University. My students come from different regions, some of them are older. I teach them the technical skills of painting and special materials; they also can teach me something I don’t know about life, so I like spending time with them.

In the future, I would prefer to be a free artist when I retire. The reason is that I have lots of things to do in my work,there is no time for me to draw .So I will stay in my house, draw something I love and play with my family members. If I could have a dog with me, it would be perfect!