Email Service Notes (Nemo)

Your Original Email

I did some work today and after the work, I took subway to my home so I have dinner at 7pm, and then I studied English and reading words. I have a shower at 9pm and then wash my hair. After I have a shower, I dry my hair. After watching TV, But 10 o’clock so I sleep. Because I can’t sleep in bed so I looked my phone an hour.

Your Edited Email

I did some work today and after the work, I took subway （to my） home so。 I had dinner at 7pm, and then I studied English and was reading/repeating words. I took a shower at 9pm and then washed my hair. After I had a shower, I dried my hair. After, I was watching TV, But soon it was 10 o’clock so I went to sleep. At first I couldn’t sleep in bed so I stared at my phone for an hour.