Email Service Notes (Nemo)

Original:

Dear Anne,

Thanks for contacting us.
We have well received your booking request for your company.

Could you please answer the following questions in next email, then I will propose some plans for you:

– How many participants will you have? Are they all adults?

– Are they all English speakers?

– What time do you want to start and how long do you want to ride on bikes? Normally we would do a 4hr bike ride with many stops on the way. However if you have a tiny schedule, we can make it shorter.

– Do you have some vegan or Muslim in your team? As well as we always propose some snacks on the way, if you have some special request please tell us in advance.

Looking forward to hearing from you
Zoe

Edited:

Dear Anne,

Thanks for contacting us.
We have well received your booking request for your company.

***To be “well received” it means getting a reaction or positive feedback from people.  If you say that “an email was well received” it means that everyone in the office liked the email

Could you please answer the following questions in next email, then I will propose some plans/options for you:

– How many participants will you have? Are they all adults?

– Are they all English speakers?

-At what time do you want to start would you like to set out and how long do you want to ride the bikes? Normally we would do a 4hr bike ride with many stops on the way. However if you have a tiny limited schedule, we can make it shorter.

set out-to start an activity with a particular aim:                                      -to start a journey

– Do you have some vegan or Muslim  any people with dietary (religious) restrictions in your team? As well as Also we always propose provide/offer some snacks on the way, if you have some  any special request please tell us in advance.

Looking forward to hearing from you
Zoe