Email Service Notes (Lily)

Today is Friday,the same as the weather which is sunny outside,I always feel great for the last working days.I don’t need to take care of my son’s homework and that makes us feel relax.Actually my weekend schedule is enrichmet.I will take my son to the Shanghai Symphony Museum in the morning,and then take him to pratice hockey.

Revised

Today is Friday, I feel sunny, just like the weather outside. I always feel great on the last working day of the week. I don’t need to review of my son’s homework and that makes me feel relaxed .Actually my weekend schedule is full. I will take my son to the Shanghai Symphony Museum in the morning, and then take him to practice hockey.