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I had wrenched my ankle this Monday which made me missed my Enghlish class.I felt so sorry about it. My sprained ankle puffed up and it was swallon like a balloon and I went to the hospital as soon as possible. The orthopaedic doctor sayed that I should stay at home and put my ankle up.The recovery time will be I’llabout 2 or 3 weeks,during that time no running 、no fitnesswhich will make me mad. But I think I’ll keep learning English.

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I sprained/ twisted my ankle this Monday and missed my English class. I felt bad about it. My sprained ankle swollened like a balloon and I went to the hospital as soon as possible. The orthopaedic doctor said that I should stay at home and put my ankle up. The recovery time will be I’llabout 2 to 3 weeks, running and exercises are not allowed during the recovery period.  no running 、no fitnesswhich will make me mad. However I think I’ll keep learning English.

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