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Joey and I went to visit the Shanghai symphonic music museum last week. It is a very famous garden residence located in Baoqing Road in Xuhui district. The building repairs as old as before. We learnt a lot about the history of Shanghai symphonic music’s development. At China, symphonic music is an imported culture. In the short period of a little over a century, It has not only taken root in China, but also blossomed and borne fruits. It is well received by the Chinese. Symphonic music is a universally celebrated music, owned and shared by the humanity.

Your Edited Email

Joey and I went to visit the Shanghai symphonic music museum last week. It is a very famous garden residence located on Baoqing Road in Xuhui district. The building remained in its historical state. We learned a lot about the history of Shanghai symphonic music’s development. In China, symphonic music is an imported culture. In the short period of a little over a century, not only did it lay the roots here, it also prospered and settled in China. It is well received by the Chinese. Symphonic music is a universally celebrated music, owned and shared by the humanity.