Email Service Notes (Kyle) —>Mark’s Email

April 18, 2019Demo StudentMark

Your Original Email

Hello Peter,

Nice to meet you! I am Mark Sun(孙桂马) from Halfen Shanghai office being in charge of industrial sector in China. My colleague in Germany gave your email address to me. I think we provided our service in many years with your company worldwide.

I want to recommend our framing channels and bolts system and Power Click system to you. Both of them are adjustable and full flexible in positioning and dimensioning and they can quickly to assemble and adjust to fix equipment and structural components.

In the attachment is the brochure of Halfen Power Click system. You can find more information via our website: www.halfen.cn and www.halfen.de.

I am supposed that we can make an appointment if you are available recently.

Thanks a lot and have a good day!

Best regards,

Mark Sun

Industrial Sales Manager

Your Edited Email

Hello Peter,

Nice to meet you! I am Mark Sun(孙桂马) from the Halfen Shanghai office. I am in charge of industrial sector in China. My colleague in Germany has given your email address to me. I think we have provided our services to your company for many years in the past.

I want to recommend two of our systems to you: the Framing Channels and Bolts system and the Power Click system. Both systems are adjustable, fully flexible in positioning and dimensioning, and they are quick in assembly and adjustment to fix equipment and structural components.

I’ve attached the brochure of the Halfen Power Click system. You can find more information via our website: www.halfen.cn and www.halfen.de.

Hoping that we can make an appointment if you are available soon. Thanks a lot and have a good day!