Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

I think most people like travelling and each person has a way of travelling which he/she likes. Some people like to enjoy their relaxed moments in the trips. On my opinion，the meaning of travelling is not only enjoy amazing views and relaxing, but also is a chance to know stories about other people and happen in other places. Regarding the stories which you know during travelling，you will have some inspiration and energy for live.

Your Edited Email

I think most people like travelling and each person has a way of travelling which he/she likes / prefers. Some people like to enjoy their relaxing moments during trips. In my opinion，the meaning of travelling is not only to enjoy amazing views and relax, but also it is a chance to hear stories about other people and happenings in other places. Regarding the stories which / that you hear / learn of during travelling，you will have the chance to get some / you will be able to get some inspiration and energy for life.