Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Presentation practise – introduction

On behalf of Eight Floor, I’d like to welcome you today. For those of you who don’t already know me, my name is Fran and I am the CEO of Eight Floor.

From your brief we found your brand wants to expand exposure, we can help to make it as 5 million exposure. By the end of my presentation, you will know we can achieve it.

We solved it in these ways:
– data analysis
– precision targeting
– unique visual and slogan
– retail price for media

Ok, I’m going to present them step by step. And there will be plenty of time for questions at the end. So, let’s start.

Your Edited Email

Presentation practice – introduction

On behalf of Eight Floor, I’d like to welcome you today. For those of you who don’t already know me, my name is Fran and I am the CEO of Eight Floor.

From your brief we found your brand wants to expand your exposure / to gain further exposure. In terms of this, we can help to get it up to 5 million people. By the end of my presentation, you will know (that) / you will be confident that we can achieve it.

We will solve it in these ways:
– data analysis
– precision targeting
– unique visual and slogan
– retail price for media

Ok, I’m going to present them step by step. And there will be plenty of time for questions at the end. So, let’s start. / let’s get started