Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Christmas day will be soon and it becomes a popular festival nowadays in China， not only shopping malls and landmark buildings have the special events for Christmas，but also many people decorate home with Christmas decorations，even schools and companies have some Christmas activities. It is similar to Chinease New year, Christmas is very lively and happy，families get together，to do something fun and relaxing，such as exchange presents，have parties and share delicious foods. Both Christmas and Chinese New year are amazing festival which are full of wishes，hopes and energy.

Your Edited Email

Christmas day will be soon / is coming / is almost here. It is a popular festival nowadays in China， not only do shopping malls and landmark buildings have the special events for Christmas，but also many people decorate their homes with Christmas decorations，and even schools and companies have some Christmas activities. It is similar to Chinese New year – Christmas is very lively and happy，and families get together to do something fun and relaxing，such as exchanging presents，having parties and sharing delicious foods. Both Christmas and Chinese New year are amazing festivals and are full of wishes，hopes and energy.