Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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Today，online shopping takes a definite big part of each person’s daily life. Comparing ten years age, there are hundreds times of online shopping channel today, like website, apps or even WeChat moment. The people who like online shopping has changed a lot too. Ten years or even five years age, just 20 something people enjoy it，but even retired person take online shopping as their essential of daily life nowadays. There is a very popular saying describe this phenomenon which is there is no problem that can not be solved by receiving an express.

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Today，online shopping definitely makes up a big part of each person’s daily life. Compared to / with ten years ago, there are hundreds of times more online shopping channels today, like websites, apps or even WeChat moments. The people who like online shopping has changed a lot too. Ten years or even five years ago, just 20 something people enjoyed it，but even retired people take online shopping as an essential part of daily life nowadays. There is a very popular saying that describes this phenomenon which is that there is no problem that cannot be solved by receiving an express delivery.