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My favorite movie is called <Legend Of The Demon Cat>. The movie is talking about the China history story that the emperor uses his favorite woman’s help himself strong power.LIU is an excellent actor and his character is emperor and Su is actoress and her character is emperor’s wife. in the movie, my impressive scene is Su ‘s first scene, she is very beautiful and has a blue mood.

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My favorite movie is called <Legend Of The Demon Cat>. The movie is talking about a Chinese historic story of an emperor who uses his favorite woman to help himself (to) gain power. LIU is an excellent actor and he plays the emperor. Su is actress and she plays the emperor’s wife. In the movie, I think the most impressive scene is Su ‘s first scene – she is in a bad mood / she is blue and is very beautiful in this scene.