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My English teacher let me write something use my free time. He said you can write some sentences like diary. Ok, I try my best!
Today is 17 Oct , The day after tomorrow is weekend, I am very happy during my weekend,
I could plan some outing or paly with my friends. This weekend my family and I will went to XiTang . This place is a small town. It’s very old but special. We will stay there for one night.
I checked the weather are very good. I will take my dog to XiTang this time, I think he will so happy. I hope the weekend will coming soon.

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My English teacher asked me to write something using / in my free time. He said you can write some sentences like a diary. Ok, I will try my best!
Today is the 17th of Oct, and the day after tomorrow is the weekend. I am very happy during my weekend because I can plan some outings or go out with / spend time with my friends. This weekend my family and I will go to XiTang which is a small town and is very old but really special. We will stay there for one night.
I checked the weather and it will be very good. I will take my dog to XiTang this time, and I think he will be so happy. I hope the weekend will come soon! / I’m really looking forward to this weekend.