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My study trip to the eastern United States
I had a study trip to the eastern united states from Aug.25 to Sep.5 in 2019. It is my first time to go abroad for study with graduate classmate, so I was looking forward to it.
We spent the period from August 26th – August 28th local time in 2019, visited the Sloan School of Management at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology. The purpose of this visit was to attend the special program at MIT Sloan designed for the executives participating in the Fudan University EMBA Program. It is included academic sessions with their faculty and a visit to a local company.
We had another course about Strategic innovation at Harvard university. We are being taught by Felix Oberholzer – Gee professor of business management at Harvard business school Senior vice President. The day we started class was their freshman day.
We shuttled through souvenir shops and shopping malls. We found that luxury goods are more expensive than China in terms of current exchange rates and taxes. My friends and I used our breaks and labor days to visit the metropolitan museum and see the famous opera the phantom of the opera.
What we gained from this study tour is an experience, as well as good memories of getting along with classmates and friends. The same people, the same places and the same goals, even this life will not have a second time

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My study trip to the eastern United States
I had a study trip to the eastern united states from Aug.25 to Sep.5 in 2019. It was my first time to go abroad to study with graduate classmates, so I was looking forward to it.
We spent the period from August 26th – August 28th local time (in 2019 – you don’t need to say the year again), visited the Sloan School of Management at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology. The purpose of this visit was to attend the special program at MIT Sloan, designed for the executives participating in the Fudan University EMBA Program. It is included academic sessions with their faculty and a visit to a local company.
We had another course about Strategic innovation at Harvard university and were taught by Felix Oberholzer – Gee who is a professor of business management at Harvard business school, Senior vice President. The day we started class was their freshman day / was the first day of the school year.
We shuttled through souvenir shops and shopping malls and found that luxury goods are more expensive than in China in terms of current exchange rates and taxes. My friends and I used our breaks and labor days to visit the metropolitan museum and see the famous opera called the phantom of the opera.
What we gained from this study tour is an experience, as well as good memories of getting along with classmates and friends. The same people, the same places and the same goals, and I think this was a once in a lifetime experience.