Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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During the last class with Samara, we talked a lot about movies in different genres. My favorite genre is science fiction.
There have been many famous sci-fi movies in America， such as Star Wars，Marvel series, Star Trek， Inception… they attract me because they are full of imagination and combined with high-technology which hasn’t been invented but it shows that people are trying to think about and make improvement.

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During the / my last class with Samara, we talked a lot about movies in different genres. My favorite genre is science fiction. / with my favourite one being science fiction.
There have been many famous sci-fi movies in America, such as Star Wars, Marvel series, Star Trek， Inception… they attract me because they are full of imagination in combination with high-technology which hasn’t been invented yet but it shows that people are trying to think of and make improvements.