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A few weeks ago, I watched <Spider—Man1 2 3> I really like spider man. Because I think he was honestly and warm-hearted. And recently I made a dream about I was a “spider man” and I can fly anywhere that I want to go. But this dream liked a rollercoaster and it was very strange. When I through the streets, suddenly I fall from the sky and then I was hurted by the car, but I still could stand… Hahaha whatever I like this dream and I like Spider-Man very much!

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A few weeks ago, I watched <Spider—Man1 2 3> I really like spider man because I think he is honest and warmhearted. Recently I had a dream that I was a “spider man” and I could fly anywhere that I wanted to go, but this dream was like a roller-coaster and was very strange. When I was flying through the streets, suddenly I fell from the sky and then I was hurt by a car, but I still couldn’t stand… Hahaha whatever, I liked this dream and I like Spider-Man very much! / I’m a big fan of spider-man / I’m really into spider-man