Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Recently in Shanghai everyone is talkkng about the same problem:garbage classification.Everyone produce garbage in their life unless they don’t eat and shopping
,but this is impossible.Garbage classification is a big project.Although rubbish classification is a little trouble, it brings us more help than trouble.This help will not only be useful for us today but also bring a better life to our grandchildren in the futuure.After sorting,different gardage will use in different places.For example,kitchen gardage can be turned into fertilizers.We can search it on the Internet China uses 4 billion plastic lunch boxes every year.Other paper lunchboxes use 500 to 700 million,disposable chopsticks use 1 billion.A ton plastic can be turned into 1500 kilogram diesel oil.Recycleing 1500 tons of waste paper can save 1200 tons of trees.
The same thing is many,if everyone makes changes to the garbage classification, then all the biology on the earth will live happier.

Your Edited Email

Recently in Shanghai everyone is talking about the same problem: garbage classification. Everyone produces garbage in their life unless they don’t eat or go shopping, but this is impossible. Garbage classification is a big project, and although rubbish classification is a little troublesome / annoying, it brings us more help than trouble. This help will not only be useful for us today but also bring a better life to our grandchildren in the future. After sorting, different garbage will be used in different places. For example, kitchen garbage (garbage produced in the kitchen) can be turned into fertilizers. We can find online that China uses 4 billion plastic lunch boxes every year, and we use 500 – 700 million other paper lunchboxes, and finally disposable chopsticks are at 1 billion. A ton of plastic can be turned into 1500 kilograms of diesel oil. Recycling 1500 tons of waste paper can save 1200 tons of trees.
The same thing is many, if everyone makes changes to the way we classify and separate garbage, then all life on earth will live happier and healthier.

What do you mean by “the same thing is many”? – we will review in your next class