Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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Today is children’s day, I saw some poetries which made by children on the phone.I was impressed deeply about these simple and sincere words so I had read them for twice and send them to my family members.Both of us were children many years ago,now we almost forget about it,we have to go ahead on the road of life,although we would feel tired and we have lots of responsibilities but I think that we should keep our hearts as the children ,so we would have more happiness .

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Today is children’s day, and I saw some poetry which was made by children on the phone. I was impressed deeply by these simple and sincere words so I read them twice and sent them to my family members. Both of us were children many years ago, but now we have almost forgotten it and we have to go ahead on the road of life. Although we feel tired and have lots of responsibilities, I think that we should keep our hearts young like children, so we can have more happiness.