Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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On 5th July I went to SMART ENGLISH CLUB to learn English. Jesse is a kindly man with a beard. I told him that I came here to study English as to find a new job and travel. I shared with him about my journey. Last year, I took a trip to Spain, France and Portugal to enjoy my holiday with my mother. My favorite country was Spain in the three countries. I’m really into local food and tourist destinations. It was a good idea to purchase luxuries in Spanish Outlets during Los Reyes Magos which is the Spanish traditional festival equal to Chinese Children’s Day. Because everything was on sale and it might be the cheapest in Europe.
In conversation, I knew so little english words that I couldn’t express my feelings. Jesse taught me to use simple words to let others understand the meaning of stence. And he pointed out my mistakes about vocabulary and grammar, and also helped me to improve it. Through this practice class,I benefit a lot. I learned that my speaking and grammar was my weakness, I need to spend more time to practice English. I hope that I can communicate with people in English with no difficulty in the future work.

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On 5th July I went to SMART ENGLISH to learn English. Jesse is a kind man with a beard. I told him that I came here to study English to find a new job and travel and I also shared a story with him about my journey. Last year, I took a trip to Spain, France and Portugal to enjoy my holiday with my mother. My favorite country was Spain out of these three countries. I was really into local food and the various tourist destinations that I visited. It was a good idea to purchase luxury products in Spanish Outlets during Los Reyes Magos which is the Spanish traditional festival equal to Chinese Children’s Day. As / Because everything was on sale and it might be the cheapest place to shop in Europe.
In conversation, I know so few English words that I couldn’t express my feelings very well. Jesse taught me to use simple words to let others understand the meaning of my sentences and he pointed out my mistakes with vocabulary and grammar, and also helped me to improve them. Through this practice class, I benefited a lot. I learned that my speaking and grammar are my weakness, and that I need to spend more time practicing / to practice English. I hope that I can communicate with people in English with no difficulty in the future