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I majored in English in Shijiazhuang Tiedao University from September 2011 to July 2015. Even though our university is well-known for engineering and technology, our English courses are diverse and practical as well. During university, I was especially interested in Linguistics and Lexicology, and I got good grades in nearly all my English courses. From then on, I decided that whatever I might do in the future, I must not give up learning English.

After I graduated, I did some part-time jobs in Shanghai, mainly to experience different working fields and to decide my life-long career. I was once a sales person, a translator, an interpreter, and a tutor. When I entered the education field, I realized that my part-time period could come to an end.

On December 2nd, 2016, I joined Only Education, a k-12 training institution which is well-known in China. From there I grew from a fresh English teacher who knew nothing about pedagogy, to a relatively mature teacher who could not only teach well, but could also sum up my own teaching methods.
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I majored in English in Shijiazhuang Tiedao University from September 2011 to July 2015. Even though our university is well-known for engineering and technology, our English courses are diverse and practical as well. During university, I was especially interested in Linguistics and Lexicology, and I got good grades in nearly all my English courses. From then on, I decided that whatever I might do in the future, I must not give up (on) learning English.

After I graduated, I did some part-time jobs / work in Shanghai, mainly to experience different working fields / fields of work and to decide my life-long career / and to get a better idea of what I may want to do in the future. I was once / I have been a sales person, a translator, an interpreter, and a tutor. When I entered the education field, I realized that my time working part time could come to an end.

On December 2nd, 2016, I joined Only Education, a k-12 training institution which is well-known in China. From there I grew from a fresh / new / beginner English teacher who knew nothing about pedagogy, to a relatively mature teacher who could not only teach well, but could also sum up my own teaching methods. (by sum up, you mean you developed them and were able to identify a series of methods?) 
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