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there is a opinion that luck make people achieve their aims.As for me, Both luck and hard work plays a significant roles in our life, since we can control what we do and have no idea when luck comes to us.

At first, hard work increases your skills. Because the competition is becoming fierce nowadays, we are selected and tested generally based on skills and talent. the more dedicated you are ,the more possible you can experience success. Altheletes spend their most of time on training to make progress, and scientists invest their effort to do reaseach.This effort compound year after year, they can get closer to their goal and ultimately make their dreams come true. In addition, people who amass great fortunes are almost always talented and hardworking.if you are incapable, it is impossible to catch a break chance.

However, the importance of luck in success can not be underestimated as well. the most significant luck of us we enjoy is being born into circumstance with education opportunity and so on . if you are born in a place with extremly low income, no matter how smart or hard work you are ,your talent seem to be ignored easily.Another example is when you apply for a job with a few spaces, the importance of luck increases.Although you have those same qualities ,you can not get that because of some factors.

In conclusion , luck plays a role in achievement ,but it is not enough to guarantee success. Hard work is also needed.

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There is a opinion that luck is part of how people achieve their aims. As for me, Both luck and hard work play a significant role in our lives, since we can control what we do and have no idea when luck will come to us.

Firstly, hard work increases your skills. As competition is becoming more fierce nowadays, we are selected and tested generally based on skills and talent. The more dedicated you are, the more likely it is that you will be successful. Altheletes spend most of their time on training to make progress, and scientists invest their effort in doing reaseach. This effort compounds year after year, which can allow them get closer to reaching their goals and ultimately make their dreams come true. In addition, people who amass great fortunes are almost always talented and hardworking. If you are incapable, it is impossible to catch a break chance.

However, the importance of luck in success can not be underestimated as well. The most significant luck of us we enjoy is being born into circumstance with education opportunity and so on . if you are born in a place with extremely low income, no matter how smart or hardworking you are ,your talent seems to be ignored easily. Another example is when you apply for a job with a few spaces (What do you mean spaces?), the importance of luck increases. Although you have those same qualities ,you can not get the job because of a number of factors.

In conclusion , luck plays a role in achievement ,but it is not enough to guarantee success. Hard work is also needed.