Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Hey ladies, shall we do it at 9.30AM? Then it would be more consistent with the later weekly team meeting. (I tries to set up a meeting with my cohort immediately before the weekly team meeting, then I can have an 1 hour only for meeting instead of 10.00 for a 30-min meeting and 11.00 for a 30-min meeting)

Your Edited Email

Hey ladies, shall we do it at 9.30AM? That way it would line up better with the weekly team meeting which would immediately follow.

Or

Hey ladies, how about we do it at 9.30AM? That way we would be able to go straight into the weekly team meeting immediately afterward.