Email Service Notes (Jesse)
Your Original Email
Rationale:
Project X is initiated to develop the teamā knowledge in terms of product offerings and business vertical trends. It aims to solve the problem that sellers are unconfident in handling customer objections. This project is expected to help sellers smooth their pitch calls and will eventually benefit customers in business growth.
Key activities:
(1). Iām the content contributor for the āAdsā part of the āMaster Deckā, and I have contributed 20 ads offering tips, accounting for 30% of the total 66 ones. The deck has been shared with the whole team.
(2). I came up with the idea of āProject X Workshopā, and I was in charge for the logistics of the two workshops. I was the speaker for the āAdsā part. I delivered the 20 display ads offering tips to multiple teams.
Results:
(1). 70+ people, and 90+ people attending the Workshop One & Two respectively with 93% of the survey respondents āStrongly Agreeā that the workshops enable them to understand Google Ads fundamentals better.
(2). 46% of the survey responders have got āMuch Moreā understanding on āDisplay Adsā, and 42% of them have got āModerate Moreā understanding on this area.
Your Edited Email
Rationale:
Project X has been initiated to develop the teamā knowledge in terms of product offerings and business vertical trends. It aims to solve the problem that sellers lack confidence in handling customer objections. This project is expected to help sellers smooth their pitch calls and will eventually benefit customers in business growth.
Key activities:
(1). Iām the content contributor for the āAdsā part of the āMaster Deckā, and I have contributed 20 ads offering tips, accounting for 30% of the total 66 ones (the total 66 ones… what does this mean?). The deck has been shared with the whole team.
(2). I came up with the idea of āProject X Workshopā, and I was in charge of the logistics of the two workshops. I was the speaker for the āAdsā part. I delivered the 20 display ads, offering tips to multiple teams.
Results:
(1). 70+ people, and 90+ people attending the Workshop One & Two respectively with 93% of the survey respondents answering they āStrongly Agreeā that the workshops enable them to understand Google Ads fundamentals better.
(2). 46% of the survey responders have got āMuch Moreā understanding on āDisplay Adsā, and 42% of them have got a āModerateā understanding of this area.
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