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In some countries people waste lots of food which they bought in shops and restaurants.why and what can be done to solve?

nowadays, buying food in shops and restaurants has became a common lifestyle and improved the standard of living.however, this convince way of food consumption has also contributed a food waste problem, especially in some developed countries. in order to solve this problem, not only individuals but also the government have to make changes .

i think there are mainly two reasons of food loss. at first, people lack the awareness of consuming food reasonably .with the development of the society, lots of people can easily get the food from shops and restaurant providing us with a wide variety of foods from all over the world and all the time. it makes us to ignore the facts that people in some area still suffer food shortage, therefore people throw away food without no hesitate.

the second reason is that the shops and restaurants lead people to buy food more than they really need.there are lots of boards in those places, such as banners reading that buy one get one. despite they do not really need so much, consumers are affected by the promotion and they finally buy.because the may think if they miss this chance, they will suffer a loss.

To solve this problem, the government play an vital role to raise the awareness of proper food consumption, by
making public announcement and so on. at the same time, retailers can conduct some promotions .for example, if cusmors finish their dishes ,they can get a discount.last but not least, everyone should change the way that we buy and use food.

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In some countries people waste lots of food which they bought in shops and restaurants. Why and what can be done to solve it?

Nowadays, buying food in shops and restaurants has become a common lifestyle habit / a normal part of life and has improved the standard of living. However, this convenient way of food consumption has also contributed a food waste problem, especially in some developed countries. In order to solve this problem, not only individuals but also the government has to make changes.

I think there are two main reasons for food wastage. Firstly, people lack awareness when it comes to consuming food reasonably. With the development of the society, lots of people can easily get the food from shops and restaurants providing us with a wide variety of foods from all over the world at all times. It makes us to ignore the facts that people in some areas still suffer food shortage, therefore people throw away food without hesitation.

The second reason is that the shops and restaurants lead / convince / push / encourage people to buy more food than they really need. There are lots of advertising / promotion in those places, such as banners reading that buy one get one free. Despite the fact that they do not really need so much, consumers are affected by the promotion which leads to increased purchasing because the may think if they miss this chance, they will suffer a loss.

To solve this problem, the government must play an vital role to raise the awareness of proper food consumption, by
making public announcements and so on. At the same time, retailers can conduct / hold / put on some promotions. For example, if customers finish their dishes at restaurants, they can get a discount. Last but not least, everyone should change the way that we buy and use food in order to make a real difference in this situation.

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