Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email


Hi Team,

Hope all with you are superb!

As many of us put efforts to promote our Ads solutions and hope our customers make the most of the 2020 B2B Fair, it’s time to have a performance review on it.

Nina and I have created a performance review trix and hope to get your inputs.

Please fill in column A to L by the end of this week, and if you have any questions please let us know.

Also, please feel free to share any pain points during customer engagement and your feedback would be greatly welcome!

Hope all of us have a fruitful Q3 and ahead!

Regards,

Natalie

Your Edited Email


Hi Team,

Hope all of you are doing superbly!!

As many of us have put effort into promoting our Ads solutions and in the hope that our customers will make the most of the 2020 B2B Fair, and it’s time to have a performance review on it.

Nina and I have created a performance review trix and hope to get your input.

If you could fill in column A to L by the end of this week that would be great

If you have any questions please let us know and feel free to share any pain points during customer engagement – we very much welcome your feedback and input.

Hope all of us have a fruitful Q3 onward!

Regards,
Natalie