Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

Dear Mr. Pahl：
I am writing to you about EC retainer expense of T-mall/JD flag shop visual design. Would you mind checking the detail expense application as follows:

Background：
EC flag shop visual optimization including EC homepage, product detail pages, ads banners, etc.

Description：
Vendor：BaoZun EC retainer上海博道电子商务有限公司
Quotation： 840k RMB in total（140k RMB/month）
Service Period：2020.7.1-2020.12.31
Service content：T-mall/JD flag shop EC visual design，PDP，campaign banner，EC ads banner，SKU launch operation
Service team：Brand manager*1；operation specialist*1；Planner*1；Designer*3

Thank you and looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards，
Jenny

Your Edited Email

Dear Mr. Pahl：
I am writing to you about EC retainer expense of T-mall/JD flag shop visual design. Would you mind checking the detailed expense application as follows:

Background：
EC flag shop visual optimization including EC homepage, product detail pages, ads banners, etc.

Description：
Vendor：BaoZun EC retainer上海博道电子商务有限公司
Quotation： 840k RMB in total（140k RMB/month）
Service Period：2020.7.1-2020.12.31
Service content：T-mall/JD flag shop EC visual design，PDP，campaign banner，EC ads banner，SKU launch operation
Service team：Brand manager*1；operation specialist*1；Planner*1；Designer*3

Thank you and looking forward to your reply.

Best Regards，
Jenny

• Hey Jenny – great email, no problems really except for one word! Good work.