Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email


1.estate: I don’t have any estate.
2.acknowledge: We acknowledge that information.
3. Transfer: I bought a bag from Taobao. They will transfer the bag to stock and then deliver it to me.
4. Treat: We always be treated by a doctor.
5. Chew: She chews rice.
6. Generous: Mayun is a rich man who is generous.
7. Local : A lot of foreigners don’t like local food.
8. Objective: My objective is pass the IELTS exam.
9. resolve: Nobody help me to resolve my problems of job.
10. Apart : we can’t work together.They apart me and she.
11. Intense: My parents begin the quarrel. It’s intense.

Your Edited Email


1.estate: I don’t have any estate.
2.acknowledge: We acknowledge that information.
3. Transfer: I bought a bag from Taobao. They will transfer the bag to stock and then deliver it to me.
4. Treat: We are always treated by a doctor. / I treat my students well
5. Chew: She chews rice.
6. Generous: Mayun is a rich man who is generous.
7. Local : A lot of foreigners don’t like the local food in China.
8. Objective: My objective is to pass the IELTS exam.
9. resolve: Nobody helps me to resolve my work problems.
10. Apart : we can’t work together, so they put us apart / apart from beer, I like all other drinks.
11. Intense: My parents started to fight and it was intense.