Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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I woke up (very ) early at 5 or 6 am. Beasue i am currently meet some prombles on my job/work which i am arranged a new peoject. I am in charge of maketing promotion. We need to think of new ideas and how to do. For now we’ll attend a exbition on 3rd July….

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I woke up (very ) early at 5 or 6 am this morning because i am currently having some problems at my work. i am arranging a new project and am in charge of marketing promotion. We need to think of new ideas and how to do everything / the project / and what to do. For now we’ll attend an exhibition on the 3rd of July / on July 3rd.