Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email


Hello Dan,

Greetings of the day~ This is Natalie from GSC Shanghai. 😉

I’m emailing you to ask a question on the deck you posted on XXX. Is it external shareable? This is a very helpful and nice deck! It would be great if I can translate it to Madarain and share it with my clients.

Looking forward to hearing from you!

Many thanks!

Regards,

Natalie

Your Edited Email


Hello Dan,

Hope you’re having a nice day! This is Natalie from GSC Shanghai. 😉

I’m emailing you to ask a question regarding / about the deck you posted on XXX. Is it externally shareable? By the way, this is a very helpful and quality deck! It would be great if I could translate it into Mandarin and share it with my clients (do you want to ask if that’s ok with him? if so add: Please let me know if this is OK with you).

Thanks so much and looking forward to hearing from you!

Regards,
Natalie