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The follow is job summary
Beijing CBRE Property Management Co.,Ltd is a Global Top 500 companies, i am very excited to dispatch to stay at Swarovski (Shanghai) Trading Co.,Ltd ,we all know the American company has intense and fast-pace .so after that period of work i learned the time management、team corporation、solve the problem flexibly and some knownledge which is I do not learn from school.
Firmenich Aromatic (China) Co.,Ltd is a international company in research and production of flavor raw material, i dont have any sales experience before, although I work as a sales assistant but i learned how to communication with the customer effectively and meet the needs of customer, I could undertake some affairs when sales manager do not stay in the office ,While accumulating experience , my ability has also been greatly improved

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The follow is a job summary
Beijing CBRE Property Management Co.,Ltd is a Global Top 500 company, and as such I was very excited spend some time contract-working at Swarovski (Shanghai) Trading Co.,Ltd which is a fact paced American company. During my time here I learned time management、team corporation、flexible problem solving and some knowledge which I was not able to learn from school.
Firmenich Aromatic (China) Co.,Ltd is an international company in research and production of aromatic essence. Prior to this position I didn’t have any sales experience and although I worked as a sales assistant, I was able to learn how to communicate with the customers effectively and meet the needs of customers, and I could undertake some duties when sales manager was out of the office. While accumulating experience in this position, my ability was able to be greatly improved.