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Poetry seems like not very useful in modern life. People is used to express their meaning in more efficient and simplier way according to the quite fast pace of daily life. However，poetry is a significant part of literary. In ancient China，writing beautiful poetry is an essential skill for people who is well educated. Actually，there are many amazing poems of ancient china were kept to now，and children‘s first class about language is start from poetry. The expression way of poetry is very delicate and simple，you could learn some feelings of writers，furthermore，you could image the scenes of poetry at that time and get the feeling of yourself.

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Poetry seems like not very useful in modern life. People are used to expressing their meaning in more efficient and simpler ways due to / as a result of the quite fast pace of daily life / our daily lives. However，poetry is a significant part of our literary history. In ancient China，writing beautiful poetry was an essential skill for people who were well educated. Actually，there are many amazing poems from ancient china which have been kept to now，and children‘s first class about language is starts from poetry. The expression way of poetry / the way poetry is expressed is very delicate and simple，and you can even learn some feelings of the writers / some of the writers’ feelings from their poetry / from the way they write，furthermore，you can imagine the scenes of poetry at that time and learn something about you feel.