Email Service Notes (Jesse)

Your Original Email

This Chinese Spring Festival was a special holiday for Chinese people because of the novel coronavirus. The virus can be spread around quickly and the best way for us to control it is to stay at home.

The symptom of the virus may cause high fever, chest pain and so on. But sometimes there is no symptom of this new virus.

The person can be infected of the novel coronavirus by touching the same things which the patients also touch such as the doorknob, the table.

Stay at home is the best protection. If we have to go outside, we should wear a face mask at least. After we come back home, we should wash hands carefully and instantly.

The government extended the holiday. On 10th Feb, some company returned to work. My company is food industry and our shops open every day. So I had to start my job to make sure our shop’s ingredients are in stock. The metro is thin these days. And most of people drive themselves .

I think it’s not necessary for us to be nervous and to pay more attention is enough.

Your Edited Email

This Chinese Spring Festival was a special holiday for Chinese people because of the novel coronavirus, which can be spread around quickly and the best way for us to control it, is to stay at home.

The symptoms of the virus include high fever, chest pain and so on, but sometimes there are no symptoms of this new virus.

Someone can be infected by the novel coronavirus by touching the same things which other infected people have also touched such as the doorknob, the table. / the virus can be transmitted by touching surfaces previously touched by infected individuals.

Staying at home is the best protection. If we have to go outside, we should wear a face mask at least. After we come back home, we should wash our hands carefully and immediately.

The government extended the holiday to the 10th of Feb, when some company returned to work. My company is in the food industry and our shops are open every day, so I had to start work to make sure our shop’s ingredients are in stock. The metro is almost empty / a ghost town these days and most of people drive themselves around rather than taking public transport.

I think it’s not necessary for us to be so nervous and to paying more attention is enough.