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I’ve been reading a book recently which recommended by teacher NEMO. The name of this book is wild swans, and it tells the story about three women in the old time of China. The story happened at the late Qing Dynasty and the warlord ruled the China. The writer’s grandmother was born in that time, she was a very beauty and whose marriage was used by his father to get him a better position in the office, for this purpose, her grandmother bound her feet very small and learnt many accomplishment which can make her became a very talent women. At length, her grandmother succeed in married with a general as a concubine which arranged by her father in purpose, but her grandmother didn’t live together with the general’s wife and the other concubines until he got heavy sick.
So it is the beginning of the book, and I’ll continue to read it. I’ll tell you more when I read more.

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I’ve been reading a book recently which was recommended by my teacher Nemo. The name of this book is Wild Swans, and it tells the story about three women in the old ancient times of China. The story happened at during/in the late Qing Dynasty, and when the warlords ruled the China. The writer’s grandmother was born during that time, she was a very beautiful and whose her marriage was used by her father to get him a better position in the office. For this purpose, her grandmother bound her feet so they looked/appeared very small and learnt many accomplishment and taught her many skills which can made her become a very talented women. At length, her grandmother succeed and married with a general as a concubine which was arranged by her father in purpose, but her grandmother didn’t live together with the general’s wife and the other concubines until he got heavy sick.
This is the beginning of the book, and I’ll continue to read it. I’ll tell you more when I have read more.

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