Email Service Notes (Jacob)

Your Original Email

require：I require remember a lots of vorcabulary to pass the grade 4 test.
promote: I went to collage to promote myself.
involve: This term i will involve my major classes.
expand: The pollution was expand these years.
inquire:The teacher is inquiring to them who brokn the window.
commit: He is committed to inquire where he from.
properly: if you feel cold,you can increase some clothes properly.
instead: i didn’t go this party,because i was weak instead of i didn’t want.
load：This car loads so many pepole that it was found by police.
elevate：The elevator elevales pepole to the floors where they wanted.

Your Edited Email

require：I require remember a lots of vorcabulary to pass the grade 4 test.

promote: I went to collage to promote myself. (we don’t use promote in this type of way, we would use it to talking about getting a higher position at work or increase awareness of something). Maybe you can say: I went to school to help myself get promoted quickly.

involve: This term i will involved in my major classes. (this means to participate/talk more)

expand: The pollution was expand these years. (expand involves more distance): The range of the pollution expands each year.

inquire: The teacher is inquiring to them who broke the window.

My example: 

Inquire – I am calling to inquire about the price about the price of internet.

Inquiry- I just got an inquiry about the price of internet.

Inquiring – I am inquiring about the price of internet.

Inquired (past tense) –  Yesterday I called and inquired about the price of internet.

commit: He is committed to inquire where he from. – He is committed to finding out where he is from.

properly: if you feel cold,you can increase some clothes properly. – if you feel cold, your clothes are not properly suited.

instead: i didn’t go this party,because i was weak instead of i didn’t want. I did’t go to the party, instead I stayed home.

load：This car load had so many pepole people that it was found stopped by police.

elevate：The elevator elevates pepole to the floors where they wanted. – Standing on something will elevate your position.

Edited by Jacob @ Smart English

Note: When trying to use a word in a sentence, you should always be careful of using different endings (ie. require & requiring). Because you will have to use different grammar to use the different forms. So by using one form, you might not understand how to correctly use the original form. So just be sure you understand how to correctly use all the forms of the word like my above example. Don’t forget to spell check your work as well for any spelling mistakes.

Look forward to seeing you soon!

Best regards,

Jacob 🙂