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I would like to share a love story and a song named “into the trance”with you. The story was happened between a girl who gave up her dream because of her singer boyfriend and a mid-aged man who insist on his music.
The girl and her boyfriend sang together before, but one chance, made her boyfriend be popular overnight. To consider the fame of her boyfriend, she chose as a shadow of him and gave up her dream.
The man was a famous music producer who was stubborn in his music writing before. Because of that, his wife divorced with him, meanwhile, his 16-years-old daughter was in puberty trouble.
One Night, the two depressed characters met in a bar. When they heard the song of each other, they decided to produce an album together. During that time, they help each other to get rid of their terrible life situation. Finally, their album got a great success also, but the two soulmates didn’t become lover in the end.The best meaning for them was to find their light at the end of the tunnel.

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I would like to share a love story and a song named “into the trance” with you. The story was happened between a girl who gave up her dream because of her boyfriend who was a singer and a mid-aged man who insist on his music.
The girl and her boyfriend sang together before, but one chance opportunity came and made her boyfriend become popular overnight. To consider the fame of her boyfriend, she chose as to be a shadow of him and gave up her dream.
The man was a famous music producer who was stubborn in his music writing before. Because of that, his wife divorced with him, meanwhile, his 16-year-old daughter was in puberty and caused a lot of trouble.
One Night, the two depressed characters met in a bar. When they heard the song of each other, they decided to produce an album together. During that time, they help each other to get rid of their terrible life situations. Finally, their album got became a great success also, but the two soulmates didn’t become lovers in the end. The best meaning for them was to find their light at the end of the tunnel.