Email Service Notes (Jacob)

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On last Saturday, Sichuan government held a 10-year anniversary to memory the magnitude 8 earthquake. On May 12th 2008 , a big earthquake hit Wenchuan ,killings about 700000 peoples dead and numerous people lost. At that time, the whole nation plunged itself into a sad emotion . Volunteers from all over the country went to Wenchuan, hope to make contributions for the injuries. some volunteers bring foods and clothes for the injuries, some people who can’t come donated money, the corporation of the whole nation repressed me much.
Time passed by, I can still remember the kindness from those strangers. Respect the natural laws and hope the god blessed all kind people.

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On Last Saturday, the Sichuan government held a 10-year anniversary to memory remember the magnitude 8 earthquake. On May 12th 2008 , a big earthquake hit Wenchuan, killings about 700000 peoples dead and numerous people lost missing. At that time, the whole nation plunged itself into a sadness emotion . Volunteers from all over the country went to Wenchuan, hoping to make contributions for the injured. some volunteers bring brought foods and clothes for the injured. Some people who can’t couldn’t come donated money, the corporation cooperation of the whole nation impressed (did you mean impress?) me so much.
Time passed by, I can still remember the kindness from those strangers. Respect the natural laws and hope that god blessed all kind the people.