Email Service Notes (Jacob)

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Dear both,
I’d like to make an appointment with you or your technology engineers on 8th or 9th, June in your office with my Germany colleagues, Mr. Günther Teichmann and Mr. Carsten Stegmann who are the Director Business Unit Industrial Technology and Ms. Helen Hao from Halfen China. The main purpose is to know the application of HALFEN products in your projects and any feedbacks or advises from your side. Could you pls schedule for it?

Thanks a lot and have a good day!

Your Edited Email

Dear Both, (is both a name or your referring to 2 people?)

I would like to make an appointment with you or your technology engineers on June 8th or 9th June in your office with my Germany colleagues. Mr. Günther Teichmann and Mr. Carsten Stegmann who are the Directors of Business Unit Industrial Technology and Ms. Helen Hao from Halfen China. The main purpose is to know the application of HALFEN products in your projects and any feedback or advice from your side. Could you please schedule for it?

Thanks a lot and have a good day!