Email Service Notes (Jacob)

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Yesterday was a sunny day. My roommate and I decided to ate hotpot. It was a long time that we didn’t eat hotpot. We went to a restaurant that is very near from our house. We ordered some vegetables and a tomato soup. Their service was not very good. We waited 40mins then got all food that we ordered. We started to eat it, it was good. We finished it very quickly. Because we already waited long time to get all food and we were so hungry. After that, we went to buy some ice cream.Both of us like sweet food.

Your Edited Email

Yesterday was a sunny day. My roommate and I decided to ate eat hotpot. It was a long time that we didn’t since we eat ate hotpot. We went to a restaurant that is very near from to our house. We ordered some vegetables and a tomato soup. Their service was not very good. We waited 40mins then got all the food that we ordered. We started to eat it and it was good. We finished it very quickly. Because we already waited a long time to get all the food and we were so hungry. After that, we went to buy some ice cream. Both of us like sweet food / really enjoy sweets.