Email Service Notes (Jacob)

Your Original Email

Dear Jacob
Good afternoon.
Here is my homework, please review when you are available.
Mr. Green wants his students to work together on a project.
Mr Green asks his students take charge on a project.
Mr Green wants his students to cooperate on a project
Anthony, Brian, and Carol are all in one group.
Anthony, Brian and Carol are work together as a team.
Anthony, Brian and Carol are owner for this project.
Anthony is lazy and doesn’t do anything. Brian and Carol had to take the entire workload on their own, so they are unable to finish everything.
Anthony is indifferent for this project, Brian and Carol had to take full workload by themselves, so they are not able to finish everything.
Because Anthony did nothing, Brian and Carol had to do all works, so they didn’t finish everything on time.
Mr. Green gets upset, so Brian and Carol tell him that Anthony didn’t do anything, and he gives them one more day to finish.
Mr Green gets unhappy/despair, Brian and Carol explain/noted him that Anthony has attitude issue, then they get one more day to complete all.
Even if Mr Green is very angry, but he had to leave one more day to them to close everything due to Anthony issues

Thanks
Candy

Your Edited Email

Dear Jacob,
Good afternoon.
Here is my homework, please review when you are available.
Mr. Green wants his students to work together on a project.
Mr Green asks his students take charge on a project. (the gammar is right be we mainly use the term ‘take charge’ the refer to someone becoming the leader for something)
Mr Green wants his students to cooperate on a project
Anthony, Brian, and Carol are all in one the same group.
Anthony, Brian and Carol are working together as a team.
Anthony, Brian and Carol are owner members for of this project.
Anthony is lazy and doesn’t do anything. Brian and Carol had to take the entire workload on their own, so they are were unable to finish everything.
Anthony is indifferent for this project, Brian and Carol had to take the full workload by themselves, so they are were not able to finish everything.
Because Anthony did nothing, Brian and Carol had to do all works, so they didn’t finish everything on time.
Mr. Green gets upset, so Brian and Carol tell him that Anthony didn’t do anything, and he gives them one more day to finish.
Mr Green is unhappy/in despair, Brian and Carol explain/noted to him that Anthony has an attitude issue/problem. So then they got one more day to complete all it.
Even if Mr Green is very angry, but he had to leave give one more day to them to close finish everything due to Anthony‘s issues

Thanks
Candy