Email Service Notes (Celeste)

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I went shopping after the English class. Unfortunately, I could not find anything that I wanna buy. Then I went back home and ate the rest food—the sausage lended from my neighbor—that I cooked this morning.
After the supper, I was playing violin for nearly two hours. Firstly, I was playing open strings for ten mins. Secondly, I was playing etude for half a hour. Finally, I was playing the song of Schindler’s List for mire than one hour. This song is described the World War Two, a entreprenuer serviced many Jew.
Before went to bed, I watch a TVB opera which starred Raymond Lam.

Edited 

I went shopping after my English class. Unfortunately, I could not find anything that I wanted to buy. Then I went back home and ate my leftovers which was sausage given to me from my neighbor that I cooked this morning.
After supper, I played my violin for nearly two hours. First, I played open strings for ten mins. Next, I played an etude for half an hour. Finally, I played a song from Schindler’s List for more than one hour. This song depicts World War II where an entrepreneur saved many Jews.
Before I went to bed, I watched a TVB opera which starred Raymond Lam.