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Year 2017 has just finished. Looking back the past year, I think I have done something good. I tried to balance my working hours and family times from mid of the year. Now I spent more time with my son compared with prior years. Since last summer I have tried to eat more healther than before, taking more vegatables, having more water and less oil. I also started to do yoga again after years.It helped me to loss some weight and feel better.
In the new year, i need to continue these habits and do better. I should control my temper better with my son. I should eat less snacks and do more excise to improve my body status.

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2017 has ended/is over/is finally over. Looking back over the past year, I think I have done some good things. I tried to balance my work hours/work schedule/work life and family time/family life from the middle of the year. Now I spend more time with my son compared to previous/past/prior years. Since last summer I have tried to eat healthier than before, consuming more vegetables, having/drinking more water and eating less oil. I also started to do yoga again after (number) years.It helped me to lose some weight and feel better.
In the new year, I need to continue these habits and do better. I should control my temper better with my son. I should eat less snacks and do more excise to improve my health/body.