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I have a colorful weekends.i watched a music play<big fish>,a theater < days shortage and love not be to old>and a old Hong Kong movie <Lingyu Ruan> in three days.
I watched a music play<big fish>at Friday evening. It was a music play of Schoolmates graduation work. And it is an Adaptation from a Broadway’s play <big fish>. In this play Edward is a trip businessman ,so he didn’t accompanied his son a lot . and he always told some his Legend experiences to his sone when they met,like met Witch,make friend with a Giant and so on . His son didn’t believe him. His son beginning to find the truth when he grown up . Unluckily , Edward had cancer.,but his son didn’t give up . He son finally realized that his father was full of passion and imagination. At the last moment of Edward’s life, he finally gained the respect and understanding of his son. and he was died surrounded his families at the end

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I had a colorful weekend. In three days, I watched the musical ‘Big Fish’, the play ‘Days Shortage and Love Not Be Too Old’, and an old Hong Kong movie, ‘Lingyu Ruan.
I watched the musical, Big Fish, on Friday evening. / On Friday evening, I watched ‘Big Fish’.  It was a musical of my/some schoolmates graduation work and it is an adaptation from the Broadway play ‘Big Fish’. In this play, Edward is a travelling businessman,so he didn’t spend a lot of time with his son. He always told some fairy tales / stories to his son when they spent time together/got together, like the father met a witch,made friends with a giant and so on. His son didn’t believe him. His son began to realize/find the truth when he grew up. Unfortunately, Edward got cancer, but his son didn’t give up. His son finally realized that his father was full of passion and imagination. At the last moment of Edward’s life, he finally gained the respect and understanding of his son and he died surrounded by his family.