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(Hi, These are my cosmetics descriptions, please Celeste or Female techer can help me?)

1. ‘Multi Cube 365 ‘product description
What`s your ‘Color Mode’ Today?
Just follow your heart and pick your color
Make up on everywhere you want
With ‘Multi Cube 365’ Your everyday is Funny day
What is Multi Cube?
It is a new multi use pot type color that you can use on your lips, face and eyes
Why the CUBE is Funny?
1. You can collect every color in this world exists
2. Make your own color palette the magnetic helps the cube fits together.

2.’Long Wear Line’ product description
Long lasting products for Chinese girls who have a professionalism of doing make up. Trendy texture and high quality products will be launched for Chinese beauty opinion leader group who can notice the detail difference among similar products.
Normal Chinese girls purchasing factor is first impression of the texture not the overall quality.
Our product quality will be compareable to other luxury products

3. ‘Drawing Line’ product description
It is inspired by drawing a picture with crayons.
Easy to use for make up beginner and early 20s.
All colors are very wearable and has normal coverage which can helps the make up looks natural.
Later, Brush type will be launched.

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(Hi, These are my cosmetic descriptions, Can Celeste or another female teacher help me, please?)

1. ‘Multi Cube 365’ product description
What’s your ‘Color Mode’ today?
Just follow your heart and pick your color
Make up on everywhere you want***what does this mean?  / Makeup from anywhere you want!
With ‘Multi Cube 365’ your everyday can be a fun day / With ‘Multi Cube 365’ everyday can be a fun day
What is Multi Cube?
It is / It’s a new multi-use color pot that you can use on your eyes, lips, and face / lips, face and eyes
Why is the CUBE fun? / How is the CUBE fun? 
1. You can collect every / any color that exists in the world
2. Make your own color palette and the magnets help the cube fit/stick/stay together.

2.’Long Wear Line’ product description
Long lasting products for Chinese girls who are on trend / who are addicted to makeup /who are a fiend for luxurious (luxury) makeup.  have a professionalism of doing make up. Trendy textures and high quality products will be launched for Chinese beauty opinion leader groups who can notice the difference in details among similar products.
Normal/Average Chinese girls purchasing factor is their first impression of the texture not the overall quality.
Our product quality will be comparable to other luxury products

3. ‘Drawing Line’ product description
It is / It’s / Inspired by drawing a picture with crayons.
Easy to use for makeup beginners and young women in their early 20s.
All colors are very wearable and have normal coverage which (can) help achieve a more natural makeup look.
Later, brushes will be launched.

eyes, lips, and face = start small then go bigger when listing these facial features

fiend (feend) n. – someone who likes something very much or is very interested in something