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I’m learning freestyle stroke.At the last time coach taught me how to took breath. This week he taught me the actions of arms. The point was when arms entered into water, I should to expand arms to straight and at same time need to finished the actions completely.When I pulled the water, Arms need to pull to back strong.

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I’m learning the / how to / how to do the freestyle stroke.  The last time my coach taught me how to breathe. This week he taught me the arm actions / arm movements. His point was when my arms enter into the water, I should expand them straight and at the same time need to finish the actions completely.When I pull (out of) the water, my arms need to pull back strongly.