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Hobbies

Reading and workout are my main hobbies.

Reading makes my mental richer and stronger. I like reading business books rather than novel or science fiction.

I learned about essential knowledge of marketing from classic text books, which are summarized through history and experiences and make me deeply understood what is marketing.

Also, I gained a lot of new ideas from modern business books, which always give me new perspectives of present marketing phenomenon. I don’t know whether they are right or not, at least they open my mind to think of marketing trends.

Workout makes my body stronger.

I work out 3 times a week. I like weight lifting rather than aerobics. I feel relax, more passion and have a good mood after workout, which enhance my life and work efficiency.

Exercising both brain and body is good to get a better life.

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Hobbies

Reading and workout are my main hobbies.

Reading makes my mind/brain/mental capacity richer and stronger. I like reading business books rather than novels or science fiction.

I learned about essential knowledge of marketing from classic text books, which are summarized through history and experiences and helped me deeply understand what marketing is / what is marketing.

Also, I gained a lot of new ideas from modern business books, which always give me new perspectives of present marketing phenomenon. I don’t know whether they are right or not, at least they open my mind to think about marketing trends.

Workouts (noun)/ Working out (verb) makes my body stronger.

I work out 3 times a week. I like weight lifting/lifting weights rather than aerobics. I feel relaxed, more passionate and have a good mood after working out, which enhances my life and work efficiency.

Exercising both brain and body is good/beneficial/crucial to getting a better life.