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Travel diary entry Oct.15, LA & Palm Springs Outlet

Today is our last day to stay in America and tomorrow we gonna be back. We decided to go to the largest outlet in California which locates in Palm Springs.

In the end of the whole trip to review it, we total visited 5 cities, via 7 states, which are California, Nevada, Arizona, Utah, Idaho, Montana and Wyoming respectively, went to 2 National Parks and other beautiful sights like Antelope Canyon and Bryce Canyon.

I have to say that these nice sights were surprised us everyday. We almost got up at 5 or 6 in the morning and backed to the hotel at 9 or 10 at night in the last 10 days. So tired so happy!

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Travel diary entry Oct.15, LA & Palm Springs Outlet

Today is our last day in the US (America) and tomorrow we are going back. We decided to go to the largest outlet mall in California which is located in Palm Springs.

By the end of the whole trip, we visited a total of 5 cities in 7 states including California, Nevada, Arizona, Utah, Idaho, Montana and Wyoming respectively, went to 2 national parks and other beautiful sights like Antelope Canyon and Bryce Canyon.

I have to say that these nice sights surprised/sights were surprising us everyday. We almost got up at 5 or 6 in the morning and returned back to the hotel at 9 or 10 at night over the last 10 days. (We’re) So tired, so happy!