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Travel diary entry Oct.14, Las Vegas & LA

Today we went to visit Grand Canyon and Hoover Dam.

The first stop is Grand Canyon. We started from Las Vegas at 5 in the morning and arrived there at 7:30. It seems that we were the first batch of tourists of today. We took the helicopter and boat firstly which was total around one hour and can both overlook the landscape and arrived in the Inner Gorge to view the sight. After that we visited two sights inside the Canyon which named Yaki Point and Yavapai Point.

The second stop is Hoover Dam which is the biggest Dam in the U.S. The guide told us that Hoover Dam Project caused the heated discussion in the mainstream of society for its disadvantage. So after that, there is no this kind of project in the United States. It makes me think of the Three Gorges Dam Project in the China which caused lots of environment problems but Chinese government just chooses to ignore everything.

Now is 3:17 in the afternoon and tonight we will flight to LA and live in the downtown. We plan to go to outlet tomorrow and I am so looking forward to the crazy shopping tomorrow

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Travel diary entry Oct.14, Las Vegas & LA

Today we went to visit the Grand Canyon and  (the) Hoover Dam.

The first stop was the Grand Canyon. We started from Las Vegas at 5 in the morning and arrived there at 7:30. It seemed that we were the first batch of tourists of the day. First we took helicopter and boat which was in total around one hour and both can overlook the landscape and arrive in the Inner Gorge to view the sight(s). After that we visited two sights inside the Canyon which are named Yaki Point and Yavapai Point.

The second stop was Hoover Dam which is the biggest dam in the U.S. The guide told us that the Hoover Dam Project caused the heated discussion in mainstream society for its disadvantages. So after that, there are no kinds of projects like this in the United States. It makes me think of the Three Gorges Dam Project in China which caused lots of environmental problems but the Chinese government just chooses to ignore everything.

Now it is 3:17 in the afternoon and tonight we will fly to LA and stay in downtown. We plan to go to the outlets tomorrow and I am so looking forward to the crazy shopping.