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Traveling diary entry Oct.6 @Silicon Valley

Today is the third day and right now is local time 03:41 in the morning and we are staying in a hotel which is based in the famous Silicon Valley. Of course, I am sleeplessness again.

Yesterday we took a travel bus from LA to San Francisco, along the famous 101 freeway, and stopped in Santa Barbara and 17 miles. Santa Barbara is a nice beach which recalled me a lot of memories about my some ex-bf, the guy who drove me here and spent a happy time with me in the 5 years ago. Now I just felt everything was so familiar, like nothing had beed changed in these years. I remembered it was a July that we drove a car in the 101 freeway and I had a bad cold but the wonderful sunshine made me feel much better…

Today we will visit Stanford University in the very early morning and then we will go to SF, I plan to book the tickets of one day city tour bus on line so that we can have one day independently to visit and enjoy this city. Sounds great, right?

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Travel diary entry Oct.6  in Silicon Valley

Today is the third day and right now the local time is 03:41AM and we are staying in a hotel which is based in the famous Silicon Valley. Of course, I am sleepless again. / Of course, I am wide awake, again. 

Yesterday we took a (tour) bus from LA to San Francisco, along the famous 101 Freeway, and stopped in Santa Barbara and 17 miles.(What’s this?) Santa Barbara is a nice beach town which made me recall a lot of memories about my ex-bf, the guy who drove me here and spent a happy /lovely/romantic time with me 5 years ago. Now I just feel everything is so familiar, like nothing had changed in these past years. I remembered it was July when we drove a car on the 101 freeway and I had a bad cold but the wonderful sunshine made me feel much better…

Today we will visit Stanford University in the very early morning and then we will go to SF, I plan to book the tickets for a one day city tour bus online so that we can have one independent day to visit and enjoy this city. Sounds great, right?