Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

From now on, I’m gonna focus on two things.
– What are they?
– Making money and setting up a family.
– Sounds like you’ve finished playing around.
– Sort of.
– I’ve been trying to pass the public servant examination, because I want to increase my pensions for my retirement life.
– How can you expect the pensions to support your life. That’s too less. You should make big money instead of counting on pensions.
– How dare you teach me that when you can make no money even at your 30s?
– Why are you so mean?
– You had it coming. It’s normal that people work for their pensions.
– All right already. You just overthink about it. Let’s talk about something else.

Edited 

From now on, I’m gonna focus on two things.
– What are they?
– Making money and starting a family.
– Sounds like you’ve finished playing around.
– Sort of.
– I’ve been trying to pass the public servant examination, because I want to increase my pensions for my retirement.
How can you expect pensions to support you? That’s not enough. You should make big money instead of counting on pensions.
– How dare you tell me that when you can‘t even make any money and you‘re in your 30s!
– Why are you so mean?
– You had it coming. It’s normal that people work for their pensions.
Alright already. You just overthink it. Let’s talk about something else.