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My colleague

i want to introduce my college, miss Cai to you

She is just graduated from college, and like every new graduate, she always full of passion and is curious about everything.

Post 90s are tagged selfish, spoiled, ego. But I don’t see any of these trait from her. On the contrary, she is active and never complains anything when she is asked to work over time.

Also, she always give me some new view from a young man’s perspective. I pretty like talking with her, because she knows about what is popular in the young people, like game, fashion, news, celebrities, and TV series, which can help brand spread right message towards young people.

However, sometimes she is a little bit stubborn. If she hardly ever accept with others’ advice if she thinks the idea is good. Sometimes she is too straight forward, she will point out your problem or deny your idea directly.

Anyway, she is smart and responsible. I think she will be a good player in advertising industry.

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My colleague

I want to introduce my college, Miss Cai to you.

She just graduated from college, and like every new graduate, she is always full of passion and is curious about everything.

Post 90s are tagged selfish, spoiled, and/maybe even egotistical. But I don’t see any of these traits in/from her. On the contrary, she is active and never complains when she is asked to work over time.

Also, she always gives me some new views from a young man’s perspective. I pretty much like talking with her, because she knows about what is popular with young people, like games, fashion, news, celebrities, and TV series, which can help brands spread the right message towards young crowds/people.

However, sometimes she is a little bit stubborn. If she hardly ever accept with others’ advice if she thinks the idea is good.***What does this mean? Sometimes she is too straight forward and she will point out your problem/issue or deny your idea directly.

Anyway, she is smart and responsible. I think she will be a good player in the advertising industry.